As you've read here before, I am diligently working on my western Travis Dawson,
Undertaker. It's been a lot more work than I realized but, I keep hammering away at it..
Here's a quick sample of one part of the story....I'll set the scene:
Travis is taking his new acquaintance Miss Sarah from the local mercantile to a dance
down the street, when their night is interrupted suddenly.
Travis Dawon prt. 34 pg 192
The dance hall on main street in Tucson was
full up when Travis
and Sarah
made their way through the front door. A burly man in
a tattered
blue shirt and Indian necklace draped around his thick
neck
relieved Travis of fifty cents at the door, and Travis escorted
Sarah to two
nearby seats which were directly below a sign which
hung
directly overhead exclaiming ‘smoking in the street only’.
Travis could
see the reason for the sign.. the building looked like
a sure fire
trap, it’s ancient hand hewn beams straining above to
keep the
well worn roof from caving in. There surely must be at
least one
hundred people in the place, with chairs and little
tables
strewn in no order at all around the perimeter of the dance
floor which
he guessed was only fifty by fifty feet.
On the
stage, three fellas were pickin’ at a guitar, a banjo and
one on a
mandolin…a fourth sat nearby, readying what looked like
an old
harmonica that surely must have come across with
Columbus
himself. Travis sat Sarah down and said, “I’ll go get us
some
refreshment, don’t talk to any strangers.” The comment
invoked a
bright giggle from Sarah with a return of “Well don’t
you be gone
to long now young man.. the night’s a wasting’.”
Pg
193
Travis edged
his way down the side of the busy dance hall toward
a table
draped in red and white with two elderly ladies in attendance
of it.
Travis recognized Mrs. Beasley from the rooming house
immediately
and shouted “Hello there young lady…you in charge of
the punch?”
“Well hello back Mr. Dawson. And yes, I am in charge of
this
refreshment stop. See you have that Miss Sarah with you from the
general
store… is there something in the future we should know about?
I also do
weddings for people..you know.. the food, drink…all the
arrangements..
that sort of thing.”
“Whoa”
yelled Travis with both hands up in the air. “Little premature
to be
talkin’ about a wedding, but I’ll give you first crack at it Mrs.
Beasley if
something like that happens down the road.”
“Wonderful”
replied Beasley as she handed the two glasses to Travis.
“Give my
regards to Sarah…and you two enjoy that full moon out there
tonight.” And
with Travis grabbed the drinks and headed back to the
seats, just
as another square dance got underway… the caller on the
platform
instructing the dancers to ‘do-se-do and allemande left’.
Travis had
been to a few dances as a kid but could never get the hang
of the four
couples listening for instructions and going in a circle one
way.. then
the other. Heck, it was easier pushing a herd of cattle through
194
a tight
canyon and down a ravine then trying to keep those instructions
straight in
your mind. However.. when the slow dance came around.. he
knew he
would have Miss Sarah out on the floor and hopefully as close
to him as he
could muster.
Travis
arrived back at the seat next to Sarah and floated the drink to
her left
hand which was awaiting it’s arrival. “Thank you Travis” she
exclaimed.
“You are such a gentleman.” Sarah and Travis were just
starting to
get comfortable and were enjoying the couples out on
the dance
floor when all of a sudden a young cowboy ran in and
started
yelling at the top of his lungs.
“Hey
everybody… come quick… the livery stable is on fire!” The
band stopped
playing immediately and the square dance couples
froze in
their last moves as the intruder repeated his excited
message,
“Come on….we need help…the livery is on fire!”
Travis put
his drink on the floor, turned to Sarah and said, “Stay
right here
Sarah… let me go see what’s going on and I’ll be back
for you
directly o.k.?” Sarah’s mellow and relaxed face became
perplexed
instantly as she spoke to Travis “please be careful…
don’t go
being a hero alright?” The last two words had just
hit his right
ear as Travis moved toward the front door…at
least a
dozen other men in front of him as they headed out of
the dance hall.
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